• Lissa Dobbs, Author

Snippet-Aliyah's Tears


I've been working on Aliyah's Tears for a while simply because I wanted to play around with the epistolary style. Now that I've gotten a good ways into it, I'm trying to decide whether to use nothing but letters, emails, newspaper articles, photos, etc., or if I want to include narrative. I've read books done in both styles. As a reader, which do you prefer?


Below is a snippet from the beginning of Aliyah's Tears.




January 12


Hey Roxxie,


You know, it would make my life easier if you’d get a cell phone. Hell, even an email address would help. Why do you insist on written letters? It’s not like you’re in one place long enough to get them. Please consider coming into the modern world. I know you don’t want to, but technology is here to stay, dear heart, whether you want it to or not.

It was good to see you last month. I wish it had been a happier occasion, though. It was too bad about Aliyah. Do you remember her back in college? Back when we all roomed together? I’d thought about using her as a character in a book and had written this about her.


I'll never forget the first time I saw her. Frighteningly beautiful, yes, but cold. Hard. As if her bones were steel girders and her heart a stone that beat ice water. My opinion of her never changed, not in all the years we were acquainted. Yet I never once doubted her loyalty or fortitude.


I think that sums up the way I thought about her. I’ll never forget that first day when she walked in with the designer jeans and her hair in that braid that must’ve taken hours to do. *shakes head* I guess we were mean to laugh behind her back, especially since she wasn’t stuck up at all. She was cold, yes, and hard to get to know. I don’t think I ever found out any more about her than that she had three or four brothers. What about you? Do you know any more about her? I guess it’s weird that I’m only wondering now.

Anyhoo, I guess I’d better stick this in the mail while I still know where to send it. I just hope it gets to you before you head off on your next adventure.

I wish I could go with you, but I just can’t get away from work right now.


Have fun.


Write soon.


Love you, girl.

Victoria

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